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Friday 27 September 2019

Missing Letter Writing


Missing Letter Writing

A unicorn leapt into the clouds that revealed it's majestic horn, struttin' towards the lime, slimy toad. The toad repeatedly jumped up and down, that cause my sudden headache. The two creatures met and bowed to each other. Their friendly expression turned into a fierce one when they each pulled out a sharp sword. The dual between the two was intense only after a few seconds. The toad jumped up the unicorns back. Threatened by the toad the unicorn flicked it's mane back, that ended with the toad on floor. The toad wasn't ready to surrender, he went under the opponent and punctured its stomach. As the reaction to the attack, the wounded fell flat on the surface, the toad squished in the process. With the toad still unconscious, the unicorn was declared the winner for this year's annual battle.



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Horror Camping Story


"Finally" I sighed after hauling the last luggage in the car. I rushed off to the passenger seat since I was assigned to be the navigator. "Ready to have the best time of your life, Sean?" Greg shouted in excitement. I heard I few shouts and woo's in the back the car. I nodded still feeling sketchy about the whole situation and me being a control freak, I didn't feel as relieved due to the fact that I wasn't in charge of the planning like I had always been.

After passing by the same views of trees, animals, and farms we finally arrived at the dock, where we will be transferring our haul from the car to a boat, in order to reach our destination. Destination, Stranded Island. Seeing my body tremble while carrying one of the heavy loads filled with our camping equipment, Dan decided to give me a hand. I gave him a quick smile and he responded with a bigger one. As the boat finally started to propel, I felt a sudden gush of wind slapping my whole body, leaving goosebumps all over my arms. As time ticks, the dock started to shrink until it was just a blurry dot in the distance.

 The island was surrounded by tall oak trees that have been wrapped in vines, in the middle was a perfect ground to set up camp, the grass was shaved cleanly in a perfect circle but the grass surrounding it looked like it wasn't maintained since the stone age.

 "Hey don't you think it's weird that the grass in the middle looked like it has only been mowed an hour ago while the rest is our knee-length?" I asked Walt with my confused face, he mirrored the same expression when he finally realised, he was about to open his mouth when Greg butted in our conversation "Come on man, stop being the party pooper and loosen up"

The night came quicker than we expected, we had just finished setting up the tent. I took the initiative and looked for kindle to light the campfire. As I picked up the piece of timber, my skin spiked up acting as a detector for a presence near me, I looked up and saw two shadows, it was quick to disappear. The bright bulb in my brain told me to satisfy my curiosity and follow the unidentified shadows. As if on cue with my foot taking a leap forward, Greg called me. I re-routed my step still feeling intrigued about the mysterious shadows.

We were all gathered around the fiery ball in the middle to keep our ice-cold skin warm, busy catching up, asking each other how our life has been when Greg butted in, having an idea of sharing scary stories to each other. Cliche. We all refused, giving him an 'are you kidding' look. He chuckled and continued to do what he intended. "I heard that this Island was famous for its history" we all faced him, slowly creeping up to him, giving him a sign to continue the story. "Apparently, 4 guys camped in this same exact islan-"

"That sounds exactly like us," Walt said, unintentionally making my eyes roll.

Thinking it was going to be a discussion about actual history, I immediately blocked my ears refusing to listen to their nonsense conversation and diverted my attention to grilling my already burnt ashy marshmallow and continue to fill my stomach.

After devouring a whole feast of roasted rodents I finally felt satisfied and headed towards my designated tent. Seeing all my travel buddies already inside, I slowly pulled down the shiny new zip, revealing Dan sound asleep. I stealthily moved towards him, afraid of one wrong move that will interrupt his deep slumber. Finally releasing a long sigh, I got to lay my eyes down and catch some z's. Bang, my eyes quickly shot up along with my body. I peaked outside the tent to see where the noise came from. Greg and Walt's tent was lit up showing a clear silhouette of a man with a knife in his hand with another sitting up. I panicked frantically shaking Dan's leg to wake him up. I looked back at the scene, the man with a knife was no longer standing inside the tent and the other man wasn't sitting but now lying down. I glanced to see the sleeping Dan finally starting to gain consciousness.

"Dan, wake up!!!" I whisper shouted at him.

"Why?" He mumbled along with a groan.

"I think something happened to Greg and Walt"

I tugged his arm, forcing him to get up.  I scanned the perimeter to see if the armed man was still around. I sneaked towards the tent across to find a bloody Walt with a big cut across his chest, exposing his organs. I gasped from the sight and looked away, refusing the fact that, that's his current state right now. I saw Dan's eyes started to fill with his tears. As a friend, I felt the need to rub my hands across his back to the comfort him about the current situation.

Despite just discover one of my friend's dead body, I understand I needed to run away from the scene unless I want my body to be next to his. I swayed my hands back and forth to signal Dan to move. We ran across the island passing by many tall trees. I halted when I saw a shadow of a man with a knife and a gun in his hands in front of our ride out of this hell. Reacting to the situation I stood behind one of the tall trees to reduce the risk of being seen by the anonymous man and told Dan to do the same.
At this moment a certain someone popped up in my head, Greg. Where is Greg? He might still be alive, I need to save him. I opened my mouth ready to tell Dan about the idea of saving Walt when I heard a familiar tune being whistled. The sound was starting to become more audible indicating, whoever that voice belongs to was coming closer.  I peaked to see who was whistling, only to have the biggest revelation in my life.

It was Greg. He was the armed man? Did he kill Walt? Was he the culprit? My eyes popped when we made eye contact. I went back in my hiding spot hoping that he didn't see me. "Come on Sean, I already saw you" I froze to the sound of my name being called out I looked to my side to see a frightened Dan. I slowly surrendered and showed my myself to the betrayer. "Did you kill him? Did you kill Walt?" I asked refusing to make eye contact. When Greg was about to speak, another shadow went out of hiding, covered in blood. "Who said I was dead?" the shadow spoke revealing him holding a gun.

Seeing it was 1 versus 2, I grab a hold of the frightened Dan heading for the direction of the boat. I ran like Hussain Bolt when he was about to beat the record, hearing screaming and shouting behind me.  Seeing that I gained 5 metres ahead of them I quickly jumped in on the vehicle and started rowing like my life depends on it. After getting a distance away from the dock I looked back seeing two silhouettes waving.

After letting the boat afloat overnight. I slowly lifted my eyes getting a blurry vision of Dan carrying a sharp object. I blinked to see it if what I was seeing was real or just an illusion. After getting the confirmation I sat up in a hurry and tried to grab the knife. Just my luck, I missed my chance of surviving by 1cm. Next thing I knew a stinging pain can be felt around my chest area. I was sure I was awake but can only see darkness until eventually, I can no longer hear a thing...
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Tuesday 24 September 2019

Critical Literacy-Musicals

Masculine
Manly
Tough
Brave
Cocky
Loud
Facial hair
Muscular
Strong
Sporty
Tall
Dominant


Feminine 
Makeup
Hair
Passive
Girly
Emotional
Soft
Sensitive
Quiet
Weak
Delicate


Little shop of horrors

How are adults constructed in this text?
This text perfectly portrayed the stereotype for a woman. They were constructed to be quiet and soft, dressed up in frilly dresses, full face of makeup and perfect hair waking up. When she was singing about her dream life she desired to own a beautiful house that she wanted to clean and cook at, a typical feminine job.

What kind of social reality does this text portrait?
Similar to real-life people were expected for the men to be responsible for earning the money for the household and the women to clean, raise their children serve food at the table. Only until recently that stereotype was broken, women are now able to work and men are able to raise their children.

How does this text construct a version of reality?
Society has always portrayed guys to be manly and dominant and on the other hand, girls to be delicate and obey what their spouse says. These types of stereotype stir up drama between the two genders and often people feel left out or confused about their identity because of it.

What different interpretation of the text is possible?



Legally Blonde

How are adults constructed in this text?
This text constructed adults to believe beautiful blonde women are stupid and aren't capable of passing high education. However, Elle broke those stereotypes despite being beautiful she was able to be accepted. Opposite of the other female in the other text she was loud and speaks her mind.

What kind of social reality does this text portrait?
There are some cases in real life where people would do anything to be with the love of their life to a point they are forced to do something that's out of character.


How does this text construct a version of reality?







Essay Brainstorming

Children under 14 should not have cell phones.

-2.They are able to contact people especially in case of emergency if they have a phone.
-3.Use phone to research things
-Shouldn't be able to have phones because they might come across some stuff in the internet they wouldnt want to see.
-1.Not smart enough to make decisions or easily driven by their emotions can be start of cyber bulliying or get badly affected by bad comments.

1.Not smart enough to make decisions or easily driven by their emotions can be start of cyber bulliying or get badly affected by bad comments.

2.They are able to contact people especially in case of emergency if they have a phone.

3.Use phone to research things


Tuesday 17 September 2019

Sentence Starter Writing


“With great power comes great responsibility”


With all his might, determined to overcome the great mountain towering him, he continued to hike along the rocky path with drops of sweat dripping down his face, making his visions blurry. Using all his strength, he gained the power to push through the abrupt part of the mountain. 'Oh no here comes the steepest part' he thought. Only having one more step to reach the mountain, he felt a wave of relief in his body, proud of conquering the great mountain. He felt a sense of responsibility for himself to keep pushing and achieving his goals.

Gymnastics

Tuesday, September 17th 2019

Gymnastic

What I did well?
The trampoline was the easiest for me and I think that's the part I did well, I am able to do one of the sets on it.

What do I need to improve on?
I feel that my forward roll needs improving. It doesn't look smooth and I end up rolling to the side instead of forward.

How can I improve?
Have a better starting position before doing it.



Tuesday 24th September

The sequence that I can do:







Thursday 12 September 2019

Bar Graph SEEL Paragraph

The bar graph clearly shows evidence of population increase due to the change in technology.
Gathering all the information from our map and timeline, the same countries were plotted on the bar graph to show the number of people on the earth starting with the world's population being less than 1 billion and ending with over 5. The reason for this sudden increase is due to technology, as technology advance, the more solutions we have for our human problems. For example, the invention of weapons 400,000 years ago helped the human civilisation tremendously, helping hunt animals for food, fur and etc. this invention moved our position from being in the middle to the top of the food chain. Another example is the invention of the steam engine in Belgium in 1859 which was shown on the timeline started the evolution for trains, being able to travel from one country to another, making us humans have more access to resources. Without the advancement of technology, the population wouldn't be able to reach half the amount we have now.

Dear Writer's Block

Dear Writer's Block

We had our ups and downs, I had given you a chance to foster over me and you let me rest after all the hard work I've done. Sadly I don't think I can be with you anymore, the time has come for us to part ways. I need to further  improve myself and  I can only do that if I let go of you. I am thankful for all the memory we shared together, I promise I will treasure it.

 Until I see you again,

Sofia

Alphabet Story


Alphabet Story

"A boo-boo" cries, Danny. Efficiently Florence got Hammy the Iguana, judgement kenned Mum, noisy, offended people, qued round, surrounding them, under-pressure, viewing the woman, "xxxshhhhhh" they yelled zipping Danny's mouth.

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Wednesday 11 September 2019

Crazy Lyrical Dialogue.

Lyrics:


I hit Fairfax, go shoppin' though-Too Young by Post Malone
Spin endless circles in the bar-Nothing breaks like a heart by Mark Ronson, Miley Cirus
Wore my heart out on a chain-8 Billie Eilish


As Mark Ronson and Miley Cirus kept themselves busy spinning endless circles in the bar, the two people that they were dreading to see, finally step foot on their door, Billie and Post. " Um...Where have you two been?" Mark said trembeling "We hit Fairfax, went shoppin' though" Post exclaimed with a ghetto accent to emphasise his dominance over the two.                                                                 "You see this" Billie said holding up her shimmering chains "Wear my heart out on my new chain" Mark nodded and so did Miley hesitantly as the four of them went their sepeperate ways.

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Tuesday 10 September 2019

Goals


Can tell others the ways how I like to learn and what suits me best.

Goals:
Open my mind to more ways to learn.
Every week try out different ways that can improve my learning.
Pick a way that I liked and tell others about it.


Friday 6 September 2019

Extension:Madlib

First Madlib:

I enjoy long, Salty walks on the beach, getting Admired in the rain and serendipitous encounters with Socks. I really like piña coladas mixed with Milk, and romantic, candle-lit Chair. I am well-read from Dr Seuss to Barrack Obama. I travel frequently, especially to Christchurch, when I am not busy with work. (I am a Doctor.) I am looking for Pen and beauty in the form of a Filipino goddess. She should have the physique of Michelle Obama and the Book of Reign. I would prefer if she knew how to cook, clean, and wash my Bobby Pins. I know I’m not very attractive in my picture, but it was taken 28 days ago, and I have since become more Sour

Second Madlib:

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Donal Duck Tinkle,

Will you let me Dream your Glass? Ever since I have laid Collarbones on Rachel, I have Licked madly in love with her. I wish that she will be the Dirt of my Water Droplets and that someday we will Wish happily ever after. I have a Umbrella as a/an Cleaner that pays $1000 each month. I promise to CookRachel with kindness and respect.

Sincerely,
Perrywinkle Bread Genie



Third Madlib:

Dear School Nurse:
Spanky Notario will not be attending school today. He/she has come down with a case of Lung Cancer and has horrible Inhalers and a/an Ugly fever. We have made an appointment with the Sad Dr. Lucious, who studied for many years in Hornby High School and has 120 degrees in pediatrics. He will send you all the information you need. Thank you!
Sincerely
Mrs. Disgusting



Fourth Madlib:

Dear Reign Reyes,

It has come to my Rose that you are the Loudest girl/boy in the Brush. My Cheeks starts Assume a Chocolate every time you speak. I would like to run if you want to go to the Prom with me next Saturday. If you Kiss please Hate me at the Auditorium in 8am To 10pm. I Consent you and everything about you. 

Slowly
Ivan


Make your own adlib here:
https://www.madtakes.com/index.php

Revision


Hyperbole

Hyperbole-An exaggeration of facts

E.g My head is killing me!
For each of the following sentences, does it have a hyperbole or not. 
  1. I’m so hungry I could eat a whole elephant! (Hyperbole/Not)
  2. May is the nicest month of the year. (Hyperbole/Not)
  3. Her brightly coloured dress hurt his eyes. (Hyperbole/Not)
  4. The roof rose up and down to the rhythm of the music. (Hyperbole/Not)
  5. I ate all of my salad for lunch.  (Hyperbole/Not)
  6. The dog was so dirty it had a tomato plant growing on its back. (Hyperbole/Not)

Turn each of these into a Hyperbole sentence:
The first is done for you.
An old car- The car is older than the hills.
 
A strong wind.- The wind was stronger than Arnold Schwarzenegger
A headache.- It feels like there is a tornado inside my head.
A fast computer-The computer was faster than lightning
A funny movie-The movie made me laugh so hard I developed a six-pack.

A hot pan- The hot pan felt like lava.
A loud, crying baby- The sound of the crying baby can be heard from space.
Heavy groceries-Carrying the groceries is my weekly workout.
A scary dog-The dog can scare a lion.

Thursday 5 September 2019

Onomatopoeia

Onomatopoeia When words sound exactly like the sound they are describing
E.g Crash! Bang! Boom!


Match the following sentences to the onomatopoeia that describes them.


  1. A plate being dropped on the floor.-Smash
  2. A balloon being burst.-Pop
  3. A gun being shot.-Bang
  4. Someone eating chips.-Crunch
  5. A light being switched on. -Click
  6. A fierce dog.-Growl
  7. A small bell being rung. -Tinkle
  8. A door opening-Creek
  9. A bomb exploding-Boom
  10. A child screaming.-Screech

  11. Tinkle
    Screech
    Bang
    Smash
    Boom
    Growl
    Pop
    Creek
    Crunch
    Click

  12. Highlight the onomatopoeia in each of the following sentences:
    1. The old engine chugged down the rickety track. 
    2. The hard-hit tennis ball whistled by my ear.
    3. The truck’s brakes screeched in the distance.
    4. The rain beat on the metal barn roof.
    5. His guitar strings twanged the sad melody. 
    6. The old floor creaked as we walked slowly across it. 
    7. The fire cracked and popped on a cold night. 
    8. The snake hissed when I startled it.

Writing my own:
My alarm clock rings every 7 am.
The bubblegum in his mouth popped causing it to go all over his face.
I was dared to chug down a whole bottle of soda in 20 seconds.
We hid behind the creaky door.
He crunched his way through eating a whole packet of chips.



Personification

Personification

Personification is when you give qualities to non-human things
E.g The house watched me closely. The trees reached out to me. 


In each sentence, an object or idea is personified. 
Identify the object or idea that is being personified
and explain which human trait or action is applied to the object or idea.

  1. The wind whispered through the gloomy forest. 
What is being personified? The thing being personified in this sentence is the wind.
What human trait or quality has it been given?
The wind was given the ability of a person to whisper.

  1. The gardener lovingly added the manure to his crops believing he was making happy flowers.
What is being personified? Flowers
What human trait or quality has it been given?
Though flowers are living they can't feel emotions like humans,
therefore, being personified by this passage.

  1.   As we walked through the scorching desert, the sun beat down on us.
What is being personified? The sun is being personified.
What human trait or quality has it been given? The sun doesn't beat down on people,
it naturally does that by the way the earth rotates.


4.  The lumberjack levelled the many trees into a clearing
and his chainsaw sang its deadly song.
What is being personified? The chainsaw
What human trait or quality has it been given?
The human quality it was given was singing, chainsaws don't sing.


5. As Alice searched for her missing pencil, she said sarcastically,
“Well, I guess it just walked off of my desk.” 
She looked at her classmates accusingly.  
What is being personified? The pencil
What human trait or quality has it been given?
It was given the quality of a human to walk.


6. When Monica walked through the shoe store,
each shiny pair of high heels called out to her.
What is being personified? The high heels

What human trait or quality has it been given?
The high heels were personified by given a human attribute of being able to call out.

Writing my own:
The cars were screaming at each other due to traffic.
The trees danced to the sound of the wind.
The alarm's shouts were heard across the school.
His headphones sung in his ears.
Her phone was wide awake all night causing it to be flat the next day.