Essay Brainstorm

People under 16 should not be allowed energy drinks.

1. Teenagers already have a lot of energy.
2. They will be encouraged to drink sugary drinks and be used to it.
3. Energy drinks contains a lot of sugar and can possibly lead to diabetes.
4. Teenagers tend to be more active when it comes to sport therefore needing energy drinks.
5. The sugary drink can interfere with puberty.

Thesis: Should teenager under 16 be allowed energy drinks?

1. They will be encouraged to drink sugary drinks and be used to it.
2. Energy drinks contain a lot of sugar and can possibly lead to diabetes.
3. Teenagers tend to be more active when it comes to sport therefore needing energy drinks.

Putting them in order:

1. Energy drinks contains a lot of sugar and can possibly lead to diabetes.
2. The drink might contain a lot of caffeine that is not suitable for younger customers.
3. They should be encouraged to drink healthier such as water.